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The diagram depicts the process that pears undergo to be canned The first step is that the fruit is hand - picked by farmers from tree and then transported to the factory. After being washed, the fruit goes for quality checking to ensure their freshness. Following this they are sent to cold storing stage. Next the fruit is weighted, pilled and sliced into pieces. Then it is canned into several cans. Having been sealed, cans are put over a fire that can be cooked the fruit and sterilized the cans. Subsequently, the cans are labelled, and they are carried to storage. Finally, canned fruit is despatched to consumers.
The diagram depicts the process that pears undergo to
be canned
The
first
step is that the
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fruit
is hand
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-
picked by farmers from tree and then transported to the factory. After
being washed
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fruit
goes for quality checking to ensure their freshness. Following this they are
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sent
to
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cold
storing stage.
Next
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fruit
is weighted
, pilled and sliced into pieces. Then it
is canned
into several
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cans
. Having
been sealed
,
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cans
are put
over a fire that
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can
be cooked
the
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fruit
and sterilized the
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cans
.
Subsequently
, the
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cans
are labelled
, and they
are carried
to storage.
Finally
, canned
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fruit
is despatched
to consumers.
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