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The charts below show the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in 2007 and 2014.

The charts below show the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in 2007 and 2014. XG2oY
The given charts compare the statistics of the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in the years 2007 and 2014. Law and psychology courses have been most sought after since time immemorial. UK universities, in 2007, admitted about 90, 000 and 80, 000 students to law and psychology courses respectively. Nursing and computer science were still at a nascent stage. With the advancement of technology and awareness about the advantages of pursuing higher education, more number of students have started to come forward and apply for university degrees, If we compare these statistics to the education trends of 2014, there is a stark difference in the number of admittees in various courses. Nursing took the lead and popularised significantly amongst the student community. About 240, 000 students were admitted to UK universities for nursing course alone, showing a three fold increase.
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Law and psychology
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, in 2007, admitted about 90, 000 and 80, 000
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to law and psychology
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. Nursing took the lead and
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