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The diagram shows how fruit as canned. Summarize the information and report the main feature

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The diagram above show how fruits are canned in the factory. First, the fruits are hand picked, because it is important to have high-quality materials. Then, they are transported to the factory to process. In the production line, they are washed and checked for any mole or faultiness. Then, they are stored in a cold room, below zero temperature. After that, fruits are weighted and graded. Then, they are peeled and sliced to get ready for canning. The cans must be sealed. The next stage in the production line is cooking to ensure that the cans are sterilized. After that, it is the time to get the cans labeled and stored. Finally the canned fruits are ready to dispatch to any supermarket. Here we saw how the fruits like peer and apple processed to be canned. The higher standards in qulity control, the higher quality in the final product.

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fruits
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important
 to have high-quality materials. Then, they are transported
 to the factory to process. In the production line, they are washed
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checked
 for any mole or faultiness. Then, they are stored
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cold
 room, below zero temperature. After that, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruits
are weighted
 and graded. Then, they are peeled
 and sliced to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 ready for canning. The cans This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be sealed
. The next
 stage in the production line is cooking to ensure that the cans are sterilized
. After that, it is the time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the cans labeled and stored. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
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fruits
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saw
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fruits
 like peer and apple processed to be canned
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 control, the higher quality in the final product. 