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The diagram shows how apple is canned.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows how apple is canned. mWljd
The process chart illustrates the information about how apple is canned which obtain different stripes. Overall, the entire process consists of fourteen stages from initial step of picking apples to dispatch utlimately. At first, apples are picking from tress by hand which imported to store by truck and washing apples with clean water. After that, Quality of apples check, then send into cold storing where apples is grading by weigh machinss. The apples is being peeling and slicing in tiny cubes in the following stage. The corning apples pour into glass cans and cover with crown corks. Next step, cooking sealing apples in the mammoth vassles and labelling on the filled cans. In the eventually, whole apple glass boxes store and dispatch at the end.
The process chart illustrates the information about how
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apple
is canned
which obtain
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, the entire process consists of fourteen stages from initial step of picking
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apples
to dispatch
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utlimately
.

At
first
,
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apples
are picking from tress by hand which imported to store by truck and washing
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apples
with clean water. After that, Quality of
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apples
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check
, then
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send
into
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cold
storing where
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apples
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is
grading by weigh
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machinss
. The
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apples
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is
being peeling and slicing in tiny cubes in the following stage. The corning
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apples
pour into glass cans and cover with crown corks.
Next
step, cooking sealing
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apples
in the mammoth
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vassles
and labelling on the filled cans. In the
eventually
, whole
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glass boxes store and dispatch at the
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end
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how apple is canned.

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3 paragraphs
125 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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