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The diagram shows how an igloo is built from snow.

The diagram shows how an igloo is built from snow. 73nP3

The given diagram illustrates the instruction of building an igloo from snow. Overall, there are 5 major stages in the process, starting with finding an area covered by hard-packed snow and ending with covering the entrance hole with snow blocks. As can be seen from the process, hard-packed snow in the area is cut into massive blocks of appropriate size by snow saw to build the base. Next, the edges of the blocks are then smoothed before being placed in a circle upward style. At this stage, a hole is dug under the wall to make an entrance. After that, a slightly massive block is filled in the last opening on the top of the igloo. Out of the remaining steps, snow is shoveled onto the outside of the igloo and is packed into all crevices, while the internal surface of the igloo is smoothly wiped by hand. Any excess snow is also completely removed out of the igloo. Finally, a hole is dug in the shape of an ideal entrance and is then covered with large snow blocks.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram illustrates the instruction of building an igloo from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
. Overall
, there are 5 major stages in the process, starting with finding an area covered by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-packed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
 and ending with covering the entrance hole with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
 blocks.

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the process, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-packed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
 in the area is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into massive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquarebarsectionbrickpieceslab
blocks
 of appropriate size by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 to build the base. Next
, the edges of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquarebarsectionbrickpieceslab
blocks
 are then smoothed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being placed
 in a circle upward style. At this stage, a hole is dug
 under the wall to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 an entrance. After that, a slightly
 massive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquarebarsectionbrickpieceslab
block
is filled
 in the last opening on the top of the igloo.

Out of the remaining steps, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
is shoveled
 onto the outside of the igloo and is packed
 into all crevices, while the internal surface of the igloo is smoothly
 wiped by hand. Any excess You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
 is also
 completely removed out of the igloo. Finally
, a hole is dug
 in the shape of an ideal entrance and is then covered with large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblizzard
snow
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquarebarsectionbrickpieceslab
blocks
. 