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The given maps depict the development of city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Overall. It is seen clearly that there were multi various changes in the city hospital in previous days. Moving to detail, in 2007, in the north side there were a ring road which spread west to east direction also there were a hospital in centure of ring road. In the west to east direction there were constructed a city road which went to the city. Staf and public car parking were situated in the east direction, or a bus stop were built in the west side also between them there were a hospital road. In 2010, the road were tottaly altered. City hospital were established same as in the center of ring road. There were a two roundabout were constructed over the ring road and city rood. Moreover, in the north side there was a unconnected public car park for community. The new facility for public as bus station in the west direction along with newly two roads.
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maps depict the development of city
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hospital
between 2007 and 2010.

Overall
. It is
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seen
clearly
that there were multi various
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changes
in the city
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hospital
in previous days.

Moving to detail, in 2007, in the north side there were a
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ring
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road
which spread west to east
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direction
also
there were a
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hospital
in
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centure
of
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ring
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road
. In the west to east
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direction
there
were constructed
a city
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road
which went to the city.
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Staf
and public car parking
were situated
in the east
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direction
, or a bus
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stop
were built
in the west side
also
between them there were a
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hospital
road.

In 2010, the
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road
were
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tottaly
altered. City
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hospital
were established
same as in the center of
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ring
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road
. There were a two roundabout
were constructed
over the
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ring
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road
and city rood.
Moreover
, in the north side there was
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a
unconnected public car park for community. The new facility for public as bus station in the west
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direction
along with
newly
two
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roads
.
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