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the diagram shows how alcohol is distilled through a set of apparatus

the diagram shows how alcohol is distilled through a set of apparatus Y2kxm
The diagram illustrates an instrument for making distilling alcohole in less time. Overall, it is clear that the process of making purified alcohol will be required some equipment. Namely a condenser, tripod, burner, and thermometer. Firstly, adjust the burden burner inside the tripod. After that, put the distillation flask on the tripod duly. Then, include the solution of water and alcohol and closed it with the help of a stopper. After all, add a thermometer into the purify flask for measuring the temperature. Furthermore, after some time, you can see the vaporize alcohol will be started into the flask. In the end, that vaporize will go for a condenser in the condenser instrument which is connected to the distillation flask. Finally, the condenser will purify the vaporize alcohol and output comes in the form of condensed alcohol which will be collected in the beaker.
The diagram illustrates an instrument for making distilling
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alcohole
in less time.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the process of making purified
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alcohol
will
be required
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some
equipment.
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Namely
a condenser, tripod, burner, and thermometer.

Firstly
, adjust the burden burner inside the tripod. After that, put the distillation
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flask
on the tripod
duly
. Then, include the solution of water and
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alcohol
and closed it with the
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help
of a stopper.
After all
,
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add
a thermometer into
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the purify
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flask
for measuring the temperature.

Furthermore
, after
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some
time, you can
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see
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the vaporize
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alcohol
will be
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started
into the
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flask
. In the
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end
, that vaporize will go for a condenser in the condenser instrument which
is connected
to the distillation
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flask
.
Finally
, the condenser will purify
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'vaporize' is correct. If 'vaporize' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the vaporize
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alcohol
and output
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comes
in the form of condensed
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alcohol
which will
be collected
in the beaker.
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