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The pie chart summarized the total expense in billions of the United Arab Emirates government of the year 2000. A very observable disbursement for social security of over 100 billion, almost one third the total budget. Followed up by the government’s spending in social services including health care, this halved from the administration most attended area. There were three general expenditures, education came last in terms of development and investment concentration, over 38 billion was spent on the children's education process. The remaining ranged from 22 to 23 billion, consisting of debt interest, nation defense and other expenditures with the cost of approximately one fifths AED total budget. Whereas law and order were spent a lower amount at 17 billion and transportation being the least to fund, cost only 9 billion to operate. Overall it can be seen that the United Aarab Emirates’ Government invested the most amount of funds into social security with education in the second place which were half infused as much, however, other categories took up much less.

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