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The illustration depicts the method of sugar production from sugar beets.

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The process for manufacturing sugar crystals from sugar beets is indicated in the chart. Overall, the process contains nine steps, beginning with shipping the beets to a factory, and culminating in producing crystallized sugar. To begin, the beets are delivered to a factory by trucks and unloaded. After this, the beets are shaken in order to remove soil or rocks. Following this, they are conveyed to a beet washer, where they are completely cleaned. Next, the beets are cut into small pieces before being added to containers of water. Here, the water is heated to 70 degrees Celsius, which produces sugar juice. The process continues when milk of lime is added to the sugar juice to ensure it is free from contaminants. Subsequently, the mixture is filtered, resulting in a completely pure liquid. It is then heated repeatedly so as to evaporate the water before being piped to a centrifuge. The utilization of centrifugal force produces sugar crystals that are ready to be packaged and transported for consumption by the general public.
The process for manufacturing
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sugar
crystals from
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sugar
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beets
is indicated
in the chart.
Overall
, the process contains nine steps, beginning with shipping the
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beets
to a factory, and culminating in producing crystallized sugar.

To
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begin
, the
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beets
are delivered
to a factory by trucks and unloaded. After this, the
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beets
are shaken
in order to remove soil or rocks. Following this, they
are conveyed
to a
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beet
washer, where they are completely cleaned.
Next
, the
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beets
are
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cut
into
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small
pieces
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before
being
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added
to containers of water. Here, the water
is heated
to 70 degrees Celsius, which produces
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sugar
juice.

The process continues when milk of lime is
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added
to the
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sugar
juice to ensure it is free from contaminants.
Subsequently
, the mixture
is filtered
, resulting in a completely pure liquid. It is then heated
repeatedly
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so as to
evaporate the water
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before
being piped
to a centrifuge. The utilization of centrifugal force produces
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sugar
crystals that are ready to
be packaged
and transported for consumption by the
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general public
.
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IELTS academic The illustration depicts the method of sugar production from sugar beets.

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172 words
6.0
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