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the diagram show the production of instant noodles

the diagram show the production of instant noodles K8Lw

The given diagram illustrates the way in which instant noodles are made. Overall it can be seen that this process consists of 8 stages. Beginning with raw materials and ending up with labelling and sealing. while this process uses a number of tools. In the first stage of making noodles flour is stored in huge silos. then raw flour with water and oil are added to the mixer. it helps to make a soft dough. after mixing well this dough is sent to the rollers to make dough sheets. before making noodles discs dough sheets are gone through the cutting machine and then they are converted into tiny strips. after that these strips become noodles discs. Some cooking oil is poured onto discs and they are dryied. after making instant noodles they are sent to the packaging area. noodles discs are put into the cups and add some dry vegetables and spices. finally noodles cups are labeled and sealed well. instant noodles are ready to be used.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram illustrates the way in which instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are made
.

Overall
 it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that this process consists of 8 stages. Beginning with raw materials and ending up with labelling and sealing. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhile
while
 this process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 a number of tools.

In the first
 stage of making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 flour is stored
 in huge silos. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
 raw flour with water and oil are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the mixer. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a soft You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 mixing well this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the rollers to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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dough
 sheets. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBefore
before
 making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
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discs
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dough
 sheets are gone
 through the cutting Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).machine, and
machine and
 then they are converted
 into tiny strips. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 that these strips become You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlayersliceslab
discs
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 cooking oil is poured
 onto Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).discs, and
discs and
 they are Possible spelling mistake found.dried
dryied
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 making instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the packaging area. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNoodles
noodles
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discs
are put
 into the cups and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 dry vegetables and spices. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?finally,
finally
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 cups are labeled
 and sealed well. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterInstant
instant
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noodles
 are ready to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
. 