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the diagram show the production of instant noodles

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The given diagram illustrates the way in which instant noodles are made. Overall it can be seen that this process consists of 8 stages. Beginning with raw materials and ending up with labelling and sealing. while this process uses a number of tools. In the first stage of making noodles flour is stored in huge silos. then raw flour with water and oil are added to the mixer. it helps to make a soft dough. after mixing well this dough is sent to the rollers to make dough sheets. before making noodles discs dough sheets are gone through the cutting machine and then they are converted into tiny strips. after that these strips become noodles discs. Some cooking oil is poured onto discs and they are dryied. after making instant noodles they are sent to the packaging area. noodles discs are put into the cups and add some dry vegetables and spices. finally noodles cups are labeled and sealed well. instant noodles are ready to be used.
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given
diagram illustrates the way in which instant
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noodles
are made
.

Overall
it can be
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seen
that this process consists of 8 stages. Beginning with raw materials and ending up with labelling and sealing.
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while
this process
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uses
a number of tools.

In the
first
stage of making
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noodles
flour
is stored
in huge silos.
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then
raw flour with water and oil are
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added
to the mixer.
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it
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helps
to
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make
a soft
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dough
.
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after
mixing well this
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dough
is
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sent
to the rollers to
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make
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dough
sheets.
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before
making
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noodles
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discs
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dough
sheets
are gone
through the cutting
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machine and
then they
are converted
into tiny strips.
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after
that these strips become
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noodles
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discs
.
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Some
cooking oil
is poured
onto
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discs and
they are
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dryied
.

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after
making instant
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noodles
they are
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sent
to the packaging area.
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noodles
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discs
are put
into the cups and
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add
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some
dry vegetables and spices.
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finally
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noodles
cups
are labeled
and sealed well.
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instant
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noodles
are ready to be
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used
.

IELTS academic the diagram show the production of instant noodles

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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