Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The bar chart provides spending information for five consumer goods categories in both the UK and France in 2010.

The bar chart provides spending information for five consumer goods categories in both the UK and France in 2010. E7x8b

The bar chart provides spending information for five consumer goods categories in both the UK and France in 2010. In general, people in the United Kingdom spent more money on consumer goods than the French during this period. The largest amount is spent on cars in both countries, while perfume and cameras are the two things people in the UK and France consume the least. People in the UK spent around £450, 000 on cars, as opposed to the French who spent £400, 000. Similarly, books are still consumed by the British as much as the French (about £400, 000 and £300, 000 respectively). In the UK, spending on cameras (over £350, 000) is more than double that in France (just £150, 000). On the other hand, for some remaining consumer goods such as computers, French spending is above £3500, slightly more than UK spending under £3000. Perfume is also spent by the French at £2000. while the British spend less than 1500 pounds. Finally for Cameras, spending in France peaked at around £3000, 2. 3 times more than Britons spending £1500

The bar chart provides You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 information for five consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 categories in both the UK and France in 2010.

In general
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the United Kingdom You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 more money on consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 than the French during this period. The largest amount is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on cars in both countries, while perfume and cameras are the two things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the UK and France consume the least.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 in the UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 around £450, 000 on cars, as opposed to the French who You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 £400, 000. Similarly
, books are still
 consumed by the British as much as the French (about £400, 000 and £300, 000 respectively
). In the UK, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 on cameras (over £350, 000) is more than double that in France (This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 £150, 000).

On the other hand
, for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 remaining consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 such as computers, French You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 is above £3500, slightly
 more than UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 under £3000. Perfume is also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 by the French at £2000. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhile
while
 the British spend less than Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.1500 pounds (0.68 t)1500 pounds (0.68 ton)1500 pounds (ca. 680 kg)1500 pounds (680.39 kg)1500 pounds (ca. 680 kilogram)1500 pounds (680.39 kilogram)
1500 pounds
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 for Cameras, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 in France peaked at around £3000, 2. 3 times more than Britons You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 £1500