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The bar chart provides spending information for five consumer goods categories in both the UK and France in 2010.

The bar chart provides spending information for five consumer goods categories in both the UK and France in 2010. E7x8b
The bar chart provides spending information for five consumer goods categories in both the UK and France in 2010. In general, people in the United Kingdom spent more money on consumer goods than the French during this period. The largest amount is spent on cars in both countries, while perfume and cameras are the two things people in the UK and France consume the least. People in the UK spent around £450, 000 on cars, as opposed to the French who spent £400, 000. Similarly, books are still consumed by the British as much as the French (about £400, 000 and £300, 000 respectively). In the UK, spending on cameras (over £350, 000) is more than double that in France (just £150, 000). On the other hand, for some remaining consumer goods such as computers, French spending is above £3500, slightly more than UK spending under £3000. Perfume is also spent by the French at £2000. while the British spend less than 1500 pounds. Finally for Cameras, spending in France peaked at around £3000, 2. 3 times more than Britons spending £1500
The bar chart provides
spending
information for five consumer
goods
categories in both the UK and France in 2010.

In general
,
people
in the United Kingdom
spent
more money on consumer
goods
than the French during this period. The largest amount is
spent
on cars in both countries, while perfume and cameras are the two things
people
in the UK and France consume the least.

People
in the UK
spent
around £450, 000 on cars, as opposed to the French who
spent
£400, 000.
Similarly
, books are
still
consumed by the British as much as the French (about £400, 000 and £300, 000
respectively
). In the UK,
spending
on cameras (over £350, 000) is more than double that in France (
just
£150, 000).

On the other hand
, for
some
remaining consumer
goods
such as computers, French
spending
is above £3500,
slightly
more than UK
spending
under £3000. Perfume is
also
spent
by the French at £2000.
while
the British spend less than
1500 pounds
.
Finally
for Cameras,
spending
in France peaked at around £3000, 2. 3 times more than Britons
spending
£1500
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IELTS academic The bar chart provides spending information for five consumer goods categories in both the UK and France in 2010.

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