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These pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy utilized in multifarious domestic types: Water: heating, refrigeration, lighting, cooling, heating and other appliances in Australia along with the amount of greenhouse gas emitted by these sources with proper ration. First pie chart explains the usage of power in houses of Australia. It's clearly visible that heating collectively with water heating consumes 72% of total energy in Australia, that is 42% and 30% of heating and water heating respectively, as Australia is a cold weather nation. Afterwards that, refrigeration, lighting, cooling and another appliance consumes of 7%, 4%, 2%, 15% of power respectively. Second diagram shows the greenhouse gas emission in Australia by six different classifications. The details on this chart partially changes from previous one. Water heating emit highest gas of about 32%, further followed by other appliances with 28%. Refrigeration and heating both release about 15% and are on 3rd and 4th place, while lighting and cooling discharge minimal gas of 8% and 3% respectively. Undoubtedly, all the details are fully described in above paragraphs along with contract and reviews.
These pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy utilized in multifarious domestic types:
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Water
:
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, refrigeration, lighting, cooling,
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heating
and other appliances in Australia along with the amount of greenhouse
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gas
emitted by these sources with proper ration.

First
pie chart
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the usage of power in
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houses
of Australia. It's
clearly
visible that
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heating
collectively
with
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water
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heating
consumes 72% of total energy in Australia,
that is
42% and 30% of
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heating
and
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water
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heating
respectively
, as Australia is a
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cold
weather nation. Afterwards that, refrigeration, lighting, cooling and another appliance consumes of 7%, 4%, 2%, 15% of power
respectively
.

Second diagram
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shows
the greenhouse
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gas
emission in Australia by six
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different
classifications. The
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details
on this chart
partially
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changes
from previous one.
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Water
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heating
emit
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highest
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gas
of about 32%,
further
followed by other appliances with 28%. Refrigeration and
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heating
both release about 15% and are on 3rd and 4th place, while lighting and cooling discharge minimal
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gas
of 8% and 3%
respectively
.

Undoubtedly
, all the
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details
are
fully
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described
in above paragraphs along with contract and reviews.
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IELTS academic household chart in australia

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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