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The diagram show the changes to a university campus between 1985 and the present day.

The diagram show the changes to a university campus between 1985 and the present day. q5Brr
The provided layout explicates the information about the significant changes in university campus from 1985 to present. It is vivid from the maps that in 1985, the library was in the corner of North- West but in present it has been merged with the IT center. The car park was demolished in these days and shuttle bus terminal has been constructed in the place of car park. However, in 1985 the admin building was in East-South corner whereas it has been decreased in present. Moving ahead, physics block and chemistry block has been converted into science laboratories. Moreover, now biology block was damaged. Instead of car park, lecture theatre has been built in the East. Furthermore, road crossed in the middle but in present time it has been replaced by footpaths. Overall, the vital change is seen in the present layout of university campus and the location of library had never changed in both maps.
The provided layout explicates the information about the significant
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changes
in university campus from 1985 to present.

It is vivid from the maps that in 1985, the library was in the corner of North- West
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but
in
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present
it has
been merged
with the IT center. The car park
was demolished
in these days and shuttle bus terminal has
been constructed
in the place of car park.
However
, in 1985 the admin building was in East-South corner whereas it has
been decreased
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
. Moving ahead, physics block and chemistry block has
been converted
into science laboratories.
Moreover
,
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now
biology block
was damaged
.
Instead
of car park, lecture
Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.
theatre
has
been built
in the East.
Furthermore
, road crossed in the middle
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but
in
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present
time it has
been replaced
by footpaths.
Overall
, the vital
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change
is
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seen
in the
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present
layout of university campus and the location of library had never
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changed
in both maps.
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IELTS academic The diagram show the changes to a university campus between 1985 and the present day.

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2 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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