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The bar chart provides information on about the number of visitors that visited three London museums between 2007 and 2012.

The bar chart provides information on about the number of visitors that visited three London museums between 2007 and 2012. 3xrmm

Overall, it can be said that the peak number of visitor’s was in 2012 and there was a steady decline of visitor’s between 2009 to 2010. The Victoria and Albert Museum had a majority number of visitor’s in 2007 and 2008. The number of visitor’s remained constant during those years at 14 million annually. However, a steady decline was seen from the year 2009 and by 2010 the figures reached to 8 million annually. It should be noted that it gradually picked up it’s pace of visitor’s in 2012 reaching 10 million within a span of 2 years. British Museum was the second most popular destination visited annually. In the year, 2007 the museum although quite popular was outrun by The Victoria and Albert Museum. It showed a constant amount of visitor’s for the next two years until 2010 where it gradually started to pick up the figures. In 2012, the museum had regained it’s position boasting about 14 million visitor’s outrunning The Victoria and Albert Museum. The most significant growth that is to be noted was from the British Museum. The only museum having the least amount of visitor’s initially to almost having more than 10 million visitor’s within a span of six year period and became the most visited museum in 2012.

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