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The graph below shows the number of applicants from four different countries in a UK university between 1999 and 2003.

The graph below shows the number of applicants from four different countries in a UK university between 1999 and 2003. aEna9

The bar graph illustrate the number of students who applied to a UK university from four countries between 1999 and 2003. Overall, it is clear that in the initial period, the number of applicants from European Nations was the highest. In contrast, in the end of this year period, applicant of Far East was dominant. Additionally, Africa remained the lowest proportion over 4 years. On observing the graph in detail, it is evident that, in 1999, the total of students of European nations stood at 30000. It is followed by the Far East and Middle East with approximately 10, 000 and 15, 000 respectively and only about 3000 Africans applied for the university. Over the next four years, applicants from Far East and Middle East nearly doubled, which counted for 30, 000 and 20, 000.

The bar graph illustrate the number of students who applied to a UK university from four countries between 1999 and 2003.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that in the initial period, the number of applicants from European Nations was the highest. In contrast
, in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this year period, applicant A determiner is probably missing here: "of the Far East".of the Far East
of Far East
 was dominant. Additionally
, Africa remained the lowest proportion over 4 years.

On observing the graph in detail, it is evident that, in 1999, the total of students of European nations stood at 30000. It is followed
 by the Far East and Middle East with approximately 10, 000 and 15, 000 respectively
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 about 3000 Africans You can apply for a job or welfare, but you apply to a university. Revise: "applied to the university".applied to the university
applied for the university
. Over the next
 four years, applicants A determiner is probably missing here: "from the Far East".from the Far East
from Far East
 and Middle East nearly
 doubled, which counted for 30, 000 and 20, 000. 