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Two charts show the use of broadband connections in several developed countries. write at least 150 words

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The table and the bar graph illustrate the usage of broadband connection in several developed countries such as South Korea, USA, Germany, Switzerland and Britain. In terms of broadband connection, the use of the internet was highest in the USA and South Korea. Also, the change in consumption of broadband was highest in Britain as compared to any other developed country. In South Korea, the consumption increased by about 13. 4% with 20 plus connections. Britain showed 10. 8% of growth with 230 plus connections, which is the highest number of connections witnessed by any developed country. Similarly, the use of broadband connection increased in the USA from 9. 3% and reached 25. 1% with 170 plus connections. Whereas, the use of broadband connections in Germany and Switzerland only increased to 5. 6% with 80 plus connections, and 7. 9% with 120 plus connections respectively. Regardless of the change, the consumption of broadband significantly increased in all the developed countries
The table and the bar graph illustrate the usage of broadband
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connection
in several developed

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countries
such as South Korea, USA, Germany, Switzerland and Britain. In terms of
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broadband


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connection
, the
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use
of the internet was highest in the USA and South Korea.
Also
, the
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change
in

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consumption
of broadband was highest in Britain as compared to any other
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developed country
.

In South Korea, the consumption
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increased
by about 13. 4% with 20 plus
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connections
. Britain

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showed
10. 8% of growth with 230 plus
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connections
, which is the highest number of connections

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witnessed
by any
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developed country
.
Similarly
, the
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use
of broadband
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connection
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increased
in the

USA from 9. 3% and reached 25. 1% with 170 plus
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connections
. Whereas, the
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use
of broadband

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connections
in Germany and Switzerland
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only
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increased
to 5. 6% with 80 plus
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connections
, and

7. 9% with 120 plus
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connections
respectively
. Regardless of the
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change
, the consumption
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of


broadband
significantly
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increased
in all the
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developed countries
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IELTS academic Two charts show the use of broadband connections in several developed countries.

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  American English
11 paragraphs
159 words
5.5
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