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the diagram show that the percentage of people on the world in 4 countries india , china , the usa and japan in 1950 and also be predicted in 2050

the diagram show that the percentage of people on the world in 4 countries india, china, the usa and japan in 1950 and also be predicted in 2050 W5L05

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