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The charts illustrate the most favorite types of film among both genders and the proportion of ticket sales for several distinct film genres in America in 2010.

The charts illustrate the most favorite types of film among both genders and the proportion of ticket sales for several distinct film genres in America in 2010. RyEyP
The charts illustrate the most favorite types of film among both genders and the proportion of ticket sales for several distinct film genres in America in 2010. Overall, what stands out from the bar chart is that men were least intrigued by romantic comedy as opposed to women who found that genre the most attractive. In addition, action was males’ most preferred type of film and science fiction was the least popular genre for females. As for the pie chart, it can be noticed that action movies were the most watched in the cinemas as their proceeds accounted for nearly half of box-office takings. Regarding the bar chart, men were not as interested in romantic comedy as women, with only 5 percent compared to 30. Exactly two fifths of males enjoyed watching action movies, while just a quarter of females were attracted to this genre. Thriller and science fiction witnessed the same pattern in which the percentage of men finding those two types fascinating was 5 percent more than that of women. Specifically, the former interested 15 percent of men and 10 percent of men were drawn to the latter. Among both genders, comedy and western shared the same popularity, which were 20 percent and 10 percent in turn. In terms of the pie chart, the number-one genre was action whose earnings made up 49 percent of a whole, followed by comedy with 24 percent. Ranked in third place was romantic comedy which constituted 12 percent of box-office incomes. With only 10 and 5 percent, thriller and other genres were joint fourth and fifth respectively.
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illustrate the most favorite types of film among both genders and the proportion of ticket sales for several distinct film genres in America in 2010.

Overall
, what stands out from the bar
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chart
is that
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men
were least intrigued by romantic
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comedy
as opposed to women who found that
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genre
the most attractive.
In addition
,
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action
was males’ most preferred type of film and science fiction was the least popular
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genre
for females. As for the pie
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chart
, it can
be noticed
that
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action
movies were the most
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watched
in the cinemas as their proceeds accounted for
nearly
half of box-office takings.

Regarding the bar
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chart
,
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men
were not as interested in romantic
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comedy
as women, with
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only
5
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percent
compared to 30. Exactly two fifths of males enjoyed watching
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action
movies, while
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just
a quarter of females
were attracted
to this
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genre
. Thriller and science fiction witnessed the same pattern in which the percentage of
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men
finding those two types fascinating was 5
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more than that of women.
Specifically
, the former interested 15
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of
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and 10
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of
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were drawn
to the latter. Among both genders,
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comedy
and western shared the same popularity, which were 20
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and 10
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in turn.

In terms of the pie
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, the number-one
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was
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action
whose earnings made up 49
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percent
of a whole, followed by
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comedy
with 24
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. Ranked in third place was romantic
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comedy
which constituted 12
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of box-office incomes. With
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only
10 and 5
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, thriller and other genres were joint fourth and fifth
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The charts illustrate the most favorite types of film among both genders and the proportion of ticket sales for several distinct film genres in America in 2010.

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