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The pie chart illustrates the information about how the global water is distributed, and the table presents the proportion of water used for in agriculture, domestic use, and industry in three different countries., including Including Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada.

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The pie chart illustrates the information about how the global water is distributed, and the table presents the proportion of water used for in agriculture, domestic use, and industry in three different countries. , including Including Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada. Overall, it can be seen that salt water accounts for the majority of world’s water, and Fresh water is made up of mainly water from ice and glaciers. Most water in Egypt and Saudi Arabia is used for agriculture, while it is mainly used for industry in Canada. From the overview, it can be seen that the salt water has the highest percentage of all the world water which is 95 percent compared to 5 percent which is from the freshwater. In addition, the freshwater has the highest percentage on ice and glaciers which is 75 percent compared to the 23 percent on groundwater and two percent on surface water. Most water in Egypt and Saudi Arabia is used for Agriculture, while the most water in Canada is used for industry. On the other hand, the least water spent in Egypt and Saudi Arabia was on Industry, but for Canada the water was least spent on agriculture. Egypt has spent 15 percent on domestic imports, the same as Saudi Arabia, while Canada only spent 10 percent of water on it. According to the pie charts, 95% of the world's water is salt water, compared to 5% which is fresh water. Additionally, water from ice and glaciers is responsible for 75% of all freshwater, followed by 23% of ground water and 2% of surface water. In conclusion, the use of water, it can be seen that both Egypt and Saudi Arabia use nearly 85% of their water for agriculture in comparison to industry and domestic usage, with the figure being approximately 10% and 15% respectively. However, the reverse is observed in Canada where 80% of its water is used for industry in contrast to agriculture and domestic purposes which use around 10% of water. To sum up, Egypt and Saudi Arabia have spent a similar amount of water used for agriculture, domestic, and industry.
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the information about how the global water is distributed, and the table presents the proportion of water used for in agriculture, domestic use, and industry in three different countries. , including Including Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada.

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