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The diagram show how to generate electricity from water in hydroelectrical way?

The diagram show how to generate electricity from water in hydroelectrical way? D6MLm

The diagram demonstrates the power of hydroelectric station and the way its produce electricity. Overall, the method is separated into the day and night stages, it commence with water flowing from a river into a high level reservation and ends with the emission of electricity to the national gird. During the day time, the first step connects the storage of the water from river into the high-level reservoir with the aid of massive dam. However, the water passes through the intake, which is open solely the day time. Afterwards, the flowing of water generate the electricity through the turbines power station. Lastly, the generated electricity is emitted to the national gird via power lines. Turning to the night time, the water is stored in the low-level reservoir but it returns to the high-level reservoir through the water pump, which is remain closed during the night time. Onwards, the river water again stored in the high-level reservoir and the period of the day it flows again down. Then It functioning the same as before.

The diagram demonstrates the power of hydroelectric station and the way its produce electricity.

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 flowing from a river into a high level reservation and ends with the emission of electricity to the national gird.

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. Afterwards, the flowing of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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 generate the electricity through the turbines power station. Lastly
, the generated electricity is emitted
 to the national gird via power lines.

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. Onwards, the river You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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