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The charts below compare five different countries, showing the electricity used (measured in megawatts or mw) in a typical hospital during one week, and also the number of emergency medical calls made by local residents during the same week. The last chart shows the average time (in minutes) spent on assessing emergency cases by hospital medical staff before the patients are treated. Write a report summarizing the information. Select and describe the main features and compare where relevant.

The charts below compare five different countries, showing the electricity used (measured in megawatts or mw) in a typical hospital during one week, and also the number of emergency medical calls made by local residents during the same week. The last chart shows the average time (in minutes) spent on assessing emergency cases by hospital medical staff before the patients are treated. Write a report summarizing the information. Select and describe the main features and compare where relevant. rLenp
The charts give information regarding one week electricity use, the local residents making emergency calls, and time used by hospital staff in evaluating emergency medical cases among five different nations. Regarding electricity consumption, all the three types of trends (upwards, downwards and stable) are seen among the countries. For example, the hospitals in France and Japan have used electricity at a stable rate fluctuating around 32 and 17 respectively over the entire week. Contrarily, the consumption has considerably spiked from the weekdays towards the weekend in Canada and Russia. Canada has shown rise from 26 on Monday to 38 on Sunday, and Russia likewise doubled from 12 to 24. Meanwhile, Argentina is the only country which reports the dip in electricity consumption from 9 to 5 by the week end. Looking at emergency calls to hospitals, the trend is reflected in the way electricity used over the week. For instance, the approximate number of calls remains fluctuated for France (around110) and Japan (about 90), climbed for Canada (from 110 to 170) and Russia (from 60 to110), and went down for Argentina (from 30 to 10). Turning to the patient assessment time, the medical staff spends a mild variation in average time used for emergency cases in Canada (11-12 minutes), France (12-14 minutes) and Japan (15-16 minutes). By marked contrast, Russia has reported a considerable rise in spending of time from 12 minutes on Monday to 28 minutes on weekends. Meanwhile, Argentina is the notable exception in keeping the constant time (12 minutes) over the entire week. In summary, the amount of electricity used and the number of emergency calls received by hospital is showing a positive correlation among them. However, no specific relation of patient assessment time is found with other two variables.
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medical cases among five
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consumption, all the three types of trends (upwards, downwards and stable) are
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at a stable rate fluctuating around 32 and 17
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.
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consumption from 9 to 5 by the
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remains fluctuated for France (around110) and Japan (about 90), climbed for Canada (from 110 to 170) and Russia (from 60 to110), and went down for Argentina (from 30 to 10).

Turning to the patient assessment
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, the medical staff spends a mild variation in average
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cases in Canada (11-12 minutes), France (12-14 minutes) and Japan (15-16 minutes). By marked contrast, Russia has reported a considerable rise in spending of
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from 12 minutes on Monday to 28 minutes on weekends. Meanwhile, Argentina is the notable exception in keeping the constant
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(12 minutes) over the entire week.

In summary, the amount of
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is showing a
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positive
correlation among them.
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is found
with other two variables.
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IELTS academic The charts below compare five different countries, showing the electricity used (measured in megawatts or mw) in a typical hospital during one week, and also the number of emergency medical calls made by local residents during the same week. The last chart shows the average time (in minutes) spent on assessing emergency cases by hospital medical staff before the patients are treated. Write a report summarizing the information. Select and describe the main features and compare where relevant.

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