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Percentage of expenditure by category by 2002

Percentage of expenditure by category by 2002 NmPD0

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IELTS academic Percentage of expenditure by category by 2002

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American English

1 paragraphs

163 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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