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Two picture show changes between colwick art centre from 2005 to present

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The figures exhibit the changes to an art gallery between 2005 to present. Looking at the pictures, it's immediately obvious that remarkable changes have taken place on the gallery for visitor's purposes. Overall. Some new applications, such as central exhibition area, has been constructed for better experiences In the west of the maps, meeting room was separated in half and replaced the snack bar — which has disappeared to time. Moreover, a drama studio has been introduced right next to the meeting room. Also, a single gallery and a café were constructed after two individual galleries were converted. To the south of the gallery, wasteland was removed to make way for stage and outdoor exhibition and performance area. Concert hall/cinema and both galleries — which in the north and east were demolished and separated concert hall, cinema, and central exhibition area were erected. Furthermore, toilet was narrowed while the information desk still retained till present

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In the west of the maps, meeting room was separated
 in half and replaced the snack bar — which has disappeared to time. Moreover
, a drama studio has been introduced
 right next
 to the meeting room. Also
, a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
gallery
 and a café were constructed
 after two individual You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
galleries
were converted
.

To the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
gallery
, wasteland was removed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for stage and outdoor exhibition and performance area. Concert hall/cinema and both You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
galleries
 — which in the north and east were demolished
 and separated concert hall, cinema, and central exhibition area were erected
. Furthermore
, toilet was narrowed
 while the information desk still
 retained till present