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the diagram show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

the diagram show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. WOAD

Given is a diagram illustrating the use of geothermal energy in electricity production. It is evident from the information supplied that the process contains five stages, beginning with cold water usage and ending with producing electricity. As shown by the figure, firstly, the cold water is pumped down to 4. 5km depth into the injection well. In the second stage, the water is transferred to the geothermal zone, where have manifold hot rocks. After being passed through hot rocks, the water is sent to the production well, before pumping up to the surface of the ground. Once the water has been pumped up, it can be sent to the condenser, where it is transformed into steam. This steam is used for the power of the turbine and rotates it. It is clear that the power of the turbine leads the generator to produce the electricity. Finally, the electricity is sent to the cities’ grid for consumption.

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Given
 is a diagram illustrating the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of geothermal energy in electricity production.

It is evident from the information supplied that the process contains five stages, beginning with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 usage and ending with producing electricity.

As shown by the figure, firstly
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 down to 4. Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "5 km"5 km
5km
 depth into the injection well. In the second stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is transferred
 to the geothermal zone, where have manifold hot rocks. After being passed
 through hot rocks, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the production well, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 pumping up to the surface of the ground.

Once the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 has been pumped
 up, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the condenser, where it is transformed
 into steam. This steam is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for the power of the turbine and rotates it. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the power of the turbine leads the generator to produce the electricity. Finally
, the electricity is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the cities’ grid for consumption. 