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the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. eB2O
the graph illustrate the earnings of one country's export products in several categories in the year of 2015 and 2016. The table indicate the rate change in every category of exports in 2016 and 2015 comparison. In the year of 2015 and 2016, this country earn money from petroleum mostly, nearly 60 billion dollars. There is a slight increase in 2016 with %3. Engineered goods also the second important export product for this country. In 2015, they earn about 55 billion dollars, and in 2016, this earning up around %8. 5 and almost catch the petroleum exports. There is an only product who reduce in 2016 compared to 2015, which is jewellery. In 2015, they earned around 45 billion dollars but with a %5. 18 decrease, in 2016, this money was approximately 40 billion dollars. Agricultural product increase very little in 2016 with %0. 81 and textiles catch the most important growth with %15. 24. Overall, this country's earning with export was not changed in 2016 compared to 2015. The rank is still petroleum, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products and textiles respectively. However, export earnings for textiles and agricultural products was nearly the same in 2016.
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with a %5. 18 decrease, in 2016, this money was approximately 40
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in 2016 with %0. 81 and textiles catch the most
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