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The diagram represents the working method of a solar pump which solely works on the power of the sun .

The diagram represents the working method of a solar pump which solely works on the power of the sun. 6lXPl
The diagram represents the working method of a solar pump which solely works on the power of the sun. Overall, this linear process depends entirey on solar energy and includes four main steps. ; converting heat energy into electricity, and passing this energy into bore pump to get the water out of the well; first solar pannel observe heat of the sun to operate bore pump, and to pass the water up to ground level firstly, a solar panel amounted on a pole, facing the heat of sun, change the heat into dc power by photovoltaic cells, then this dc power is transferred down to the bore pump located below ground level in well, this pump pushes the water at upper surface of the ground through an underline pipe which is connected to one side of water tank. when the is tranferred to water tank via subline pipe, it is used further for supplying whole village.
The diagram represents the working method of a
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energy and includes four main steps.
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converting
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heat
energy into electricity, and passing this energy into bore
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pump
to
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get
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out of the well;
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solar
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pannel
observe
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heat
of the sun to operate bore
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pump
, and to pass the
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water
up to ground level

firstly
, a
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panel amounted on a pole, facing the
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heat
of sun,
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change
the
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heat
into dc power by photovoltaic cells, then this dc power
is transferred
down to the bore
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pump
located below ground level in well, this
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pump
pushes the
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water
at upper surface of the ground through an underline pipe which
is connected
to one side of
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water
tank.

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tank via
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pipe, it is
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used
further
for supplying whole village.
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IELTS academic The diagram represents the working method of a solar pump which solely works on the power of the sun.

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156 words
5.5
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