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The diagram provides information about how tourists' trampling ruin the countryside environment.

The diagram provides information about how tourists' trampling ruin the countryside environment. K0nlw
The given diagram illustrates how travellers adversely affect the environment in the coutryside by walking in the area and it creates an effect knonw as ‘trampling’. Overall, erosion, less healthy soil and flora are the results of tourists walking in the area. To begin with, trampling occurs when tourists step on and flatten the grass. This activity poses two detrimental affects on the environment. The first one is the damage to natural plants which causes plants becoming weaker as well as loses the ability to reproduce and raise. This means that the amount of plants in the countryside will significantly decline. Another consequence of trampling is that soil becomes compacted and harder. This leads to the fall of air and water quality in the soil. As a result, soil is eroded, water runs off the land and it can affect the developments of flora. Ultimately, the countryside suffers from erosion and the lost of soil and plant life.
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adversely
affect the environment in the
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coutryside
by walking in the area and it creates an effect
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as ‘trampling’.

Overall
, erosion, less healthy
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soil
and flora are the results of tourists walking in the area.

To
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begin
with, trampling occurs when tourists step on and flatten the grass. This activity poses two detrimental affects on the environment. The
first
one is the damage to natural
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plants
which causes
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plants
becoming weaker
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as
well as loses the ability to reproduce and raise. This means that the amount of
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plants
in the countryside will
significantly
decline. Another consequence of trampling is that
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soil
becomes compacted and harder. This leads to the fall of air and water quality in the
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soil
.
As a result
,
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soil
is eroded
, water runs off the land and it can affect the developments of flora.
Ultimately
, the countryside suffers from erosion and the lost of
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soil
and
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plant
life.
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IELTS academic The diagram provides information about how tourists' trampling ruin the countryside environment.

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6.0
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