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The shard below shows the value of one countries exports it's in various categories during หมู่ภูเขา2015 anThe short below shows the value of one countries exports it's in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compare with 2015.

The chart illustrates the value of exported goods in a one specific geographical area that was divided in 5 different categories in the year 2015 and 2016. The table represents the comparison percentage change in the vale of products between the 2 year mentioned. Overall, it is noticeable that the most valued products in both year was petroleum products. In contrast, the most categorise that examines the most change was textiles. Surprisingly, the only categories demonstrates a decrease was gems and jewellery. Focusing on the given chart, the data represent that petroleum product was the most valuable products of all in both year, followed by engineer goods, jewellery, agriculture and, finally, textiles. Interestingly, the value of products in 2016 in most of the categories was more than that in 2015, especially in the textiles products. Turning to the table, it is obvious that the only categories shows a percentage decrease was gem and jewellery, to be specific, the number reduced by 5. 18 percent. The most significant increase was the percentage increase in textiles, the percentage rose by 15. 24 percent, which is just above 5 times more than the increase in petroleum products. On th other hand, Agriculture product show the least increase, just under 1 percent.
The chart illustrates the value of exported
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2015 and 2016. The table represents the comparison
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in the vale of
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between the 2
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in both
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was petroleum
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products
.
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that examines the most
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demonstrates a decrease was gems and
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jewellery
.

Focusing on the
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was the most valuable
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of all in both
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, followed by engineer
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jewellery
, agriculture and,
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textiles
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Interestingly
, the value of
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in 2016 in most of the
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was more than that in 2015,
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textiles
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Turning to the table, it is obvious that the
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decrease was gem and
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, to be specific, the number
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by 5. 18 percent. The most significant
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, the
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rose by 15. 24 percent, which is
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in petroleum
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other hand, Agriculture
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IELTS academic The shard below shows the value of one countries exports it's in various categories during หมู่ภูเขา2015 anThe short below shows the value of one countries exports it's in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compare with 2015.

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