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The diagram on how to make noodles

The diagram on how to make noodles 5LVxp
The illustration depicts how to produce an instant noodles. Firstly, we need to add flours to the storage silos. Secondly, this flour in the silos transfer to the mixer. Later, flour will mix with water and oil. Water and oil are the essential component for making noodles. Following, mixed flour will turn to dough sheet and then change to dough strips which is the actual shape of a noodles. Then this dough strips dump to noodles disc. Within it the dough strips cooked as noodles by adding some oil. Then keep for drying. Meanwhile, it get packed in cups alongside vegetables and spices are added. After packing labeling and sealing will take place. Consequently, instant noodles are produced.
The illustration depicts how to produce an instant
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noodles
.
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, we need to
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add
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flours
to the storage silos.
Secondly
, this
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flour
in the silos transfer to the mixer. Later,
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flour
will mix with water and oil. Water and oil are the essential component for making
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noodles
. Following, mixed
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flour
will turn to
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dough
sheet and then
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change
to
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dough
strips which is the actual shape of a
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noodles
. Then this
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dough
strips dump to
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noodles
disc. Within it the
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dough
strips cooked as
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noodles
by adding
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some
oil. Then
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keep
for drying. Meanwhile, it
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packed in cups alongside vegetables and spices are
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added
. After packing labeling and sealing will take place.
Consequently
, instant
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noodles
are produced
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IELTS academic The diagram on how to make noodles

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