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The given bar chart clearly depicts information regarding the number of applicants, divided by gender, for 6 particularly courses at Ahmadu Bello University in Nigeria. The 6 courses include Engineer, Language and Education, Arts, Science, Computer, and Medicine and Pharmacy. Overall, it is noticeable that there are 2, 390 candidates (1, 300 males and 1, 090 females) in total, most of whom (520 males and 200 females) applied for the course of Engineer. In further detail, it can be notice that the course of Language and Education is the second most popular with 650 enrollment (200 males and 450 females), followed by the course of Art with 430 ones (250 males and 130 females). Meanwhile, there are almost as many registrants for the course of Science at 280 (150 males and 130 females) as those for the course of Computing at 180 (100 males and 80 females). Finally, the figure of attendants for the course of Medicine and Pharmacy accounts for the lowest at only 130 (80 males and 50 females).
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Ahmadu
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University in Nigeria. The 6
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include Engineer, Language and Education, Arts, Science, Computer, and Medicine and Pharmacy.
Overall
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males
and 1, 090
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females)
in total, most of whom (520
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and 200
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applied for the
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course
of Engineer.

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further
detail, it can be notice that the
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of Language and Education is the second most popular with 650 enrollment (200
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males
and 450
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females)
, followed by the
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course
of Art with 430 ones (250
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males
and 130
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females)
. Meanwhile, there are almost as
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many
registrants for the
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course
of Science at 280 (150
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males
and 130
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females)
as those for the
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course
of Computing at 180 (100
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males
and 80
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females)
.
Finally
, the figure of attendants for the
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course
of Medicine and Pharmacy accounts for the lowest at
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130 (80
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males
and 50
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.
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