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diversity of houses for living acccording to survey of 25-year-olds’ in London with period 1990s and 2010s

diversity of houses for living acccording to survey of 25-year-olds’ in London with period 1990s and 2010s My6GL
The pie charts and the table give information about diversity of houses for living acccording to survey of 25-year-olds’ in London with period 1990s and 2010s, and the availability of kind of houses in London during the same two periods. There is a significant different kind of living alone and shared in 1990s and 2010s, people have a tendency to choose shared houses in 2010s rather than in 1990s and it was linier with the increasing availability for 3-4 bedroom houses so people more choosing shared houses rather than alone. The availability for houses has decreasing in 2010, especially in types of 1-2 bedroom houses and flats, and 3-4 bedrooms flats. So, its emphasizes for young adults to choose shared houses. And also amount of adults living with parent’s house still be choices but no significant decreasing
The pie charts and the table give information about diversity of
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acccording
to survey of 25-year-olds’ in London with period 1990s and 2010s, and the availability of kind of
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houses
in London during the same two periods.

There is a significant
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different
kind of living alone and
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shared
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in 1990s
and 2010s,
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people
have a tendency to choose
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shared
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houses
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in 2010s
rather
than
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in 1990s
and it was
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linier
with the increasing availability for 3-4 bedroom
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houses
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so
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people
more choosing
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shared
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houses
rather
than alone. The availability for
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houses
has decreasing in 2010,
especially
in types of 1-2 bedroom
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houses
and flats, and 3-4 bedrooms flats.
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So
, its emphasizes for young adults to choose
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shared
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houses
.

And
also
amount of adults living with parent’s
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house
still
be choices
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but
no significant

decreasing

IELTS academic diversity of houses for living acccording to survey of 25-year-olds’ in London with period 1990s and 2010s

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