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The graph demonstrates data about comparing workers' rates economy in the tree sectors of UK over a decade from 2000 to 2010. Overall, it can be seen that there was a dramatic decrease in the Private sector, while the other two sectors went noticeable up over the period. Another interesting point is that the Private sector had the most rates for employing, on the contrary in 2010 Public sector rose to the highest point.

The graph demonstrates data about comparing workers' rates economy in the tree sectors of UK over a decade from 2000 to 2010. Overall, it can be seen that there was a dramatic decrease in the Private sector, while the other two sectors went noticeable up over the period. Another interesting point is that the Private sector had the most rates for employing, on the contrary in 2010 Public sector rose to the highest point. 25J7x
The graph demonstrates data about comparing workers' rates economy in the tree sectors of UK over a decade from 2000 to 2010. Overall, it can be seen that there was a dramatic decrease in the Private sector, while the other two sectors went noticeable up over the period. Another interesting point is that the Private sector had the most rates for employing, on the contrary in 2010 Public sector rose to the highest point.
The graph demonstrates data about comparing workers' rates economy in the tree
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of UK over a decade from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
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that there was a dramatic decrease in the Private
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, while the other two
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went noticeable up over the period. Another interesting point is that the Private
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had the most rates for employing,
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in 2010 Public
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rose to the highest point.
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