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The given pie charts demonstrate how many people were arrested between 1990 and 1994 percentagewise while bar graph illustrate seven reasons for arrest.

The given pie charts demonstrate how many people were arrested between 1990 and 1994 percentagewise while bar graph illustrate seven reasons for arrest. 7QVY

The given pie charts demonstrate how many people were arrested between 1990 and 1994 percentagewise while bar graph illustrate seven reasons for arrest. Overall it can be seen that most of men were arrested than females during five years of period. the reason for most recent arrest was public drinking while lower proportion of people were arrested due to no answer. it is apparent from the chart approximately one-third of males and about one tenth of females were arrested in five years of period. furthermore public drinking was the major issue for arrest both men and women. They accounted for about 30%abd 37%respectively. another main reason for men was drink driving which comprised of nearly 26%and females reduced by roughly 12%. almost 17%males drove breaching orders.

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given
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjailedseized
arrested
 between 1990 and 1994 Possible spelling mistake found.percentage wise
percentagewise
 while bar graph illustrate seven reasons for arrest.

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 it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that most of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjailedseized
arrested
 than females during five years of period. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 reason for most recent arrest was public drinking while lower proportion of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjailedseized
arrested
 due to no answer.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 is apparent from the chart approximately one-third of males and about one tenth of females were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjailedseized
arrested
 in five years of period.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?furthermore,
furthermore
 public drinking was the major issue for arrest both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 and women. They accounted for about 30%abd 37%respectively
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnother
another
 main reason for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 was This word is normally spelled with hyphen.drink-driving
drink driving
Did you mean "which comprised" or "which consisted of" or "which was composed of"?which comprisedwhich consisted ofwhich was composed of
which comprised of
nearly
 26%and females This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 by roughly 12%. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAlmost
almost
 17%males drove breaching orders. 