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The given pie charts demonstrate how many people were arrested between 1990 and 1994 percentagewise while bar graph illustrate seven reasons for arrest.

The given pie charts demonstrate how many people were arrested between 1990 and 1994 percentagewise while bar graph illustrate seven reasons for arrest. 7QVY
The given pie charts demonstrate how many people were arrested between 1990 and 1994 percentagewise while bar graph illustrate seven reasons for arrest. Overall it can be seen that most of men were arrested than females during five years of period. the reason for most recent arrest was public drinking while lower proportion of people were arrested due to no answer. it is apparent from the chart approximately one-third of males and about one tenth of females were arrested in five years of period. furthermore public drinking was the major issue for arrest both men and women. They accounted for about 30%abd 37%respectively. another main reason for men was drink driving which comprised of nearly 26%and females reduced by roughly 12%. almost 17%males drove breaching orders.
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many
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people
were
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arrested
between 1990 and 1994
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percentagewise
while bar graph illustrate seven reasons for arrest.

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it can be
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seen
that most of
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men
were
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arrested
than females during five years of period.
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the
reason for most recent arrest was public drinking while lower proportion of
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people
were
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arrested
due to no answer.

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it
is apparent from the chart approximately one-third of males and about one tenth of females were
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arrested
in five years of period.

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furthermore
public drinking was the major issue for arrest both
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men
and women. They accounted for about 30%abd 37%
respectively
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another
main reason for
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men
was
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drink driving
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reduced
by roughly 12%.
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almost
17%males drove breaching orders.

IELTS academic The given pie charts demonstrate how many people were arrested between 1990 and 1994 percentagewise while bar graph illustrate seven reasons for arrest.

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