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The diagram below shows how Olive Oil is manufactured

The diagram depicts the procedure of producing Olive Oil. Overall, this is a step-by-step process that is comprised of 7 stages, from harvesting the olive fruits from the trees to storing for sale in the shop. Initially, the ripen fruits are picked from the trees and collected in some box, then, it is washed and rinsed properly from the cold water. After the previous step, the washed olives are put on the conveyor belt to pass it for smashing where the fruits are crushed and separated from their seeds. Once the smashing step is performed the wet olives turn into the paste which is stuffed into the bags having holes before pressing them. As soon as the bags filled with pastes are pressed, the oil is then extracted in the next step called Extraction where oil and water are separated from each other. At last, the final product is delivered to the warehouse or shops in order to store or sell

The diagram depicts the procedure of producing Olive Oil.

Overall
, this is a step-by-step process that Did you mean "comprises" or "consists of" or "is composed of"?comprisesconsists ofis composed of
is comprised of
 7 stages, from harvesting the olive fruits from the trees to storing for sale in the shop.

Initially
, After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'ripen' is correct. If 'ripen' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the ripen
 fruits are picked
 from the trees and collected in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 box, then, it is washed
 and rinsed properly
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cold
 water. After the previous step, the washed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are put
 on the conveyor belt to pass it for smashing where the fruits are crushed
 and separated from their seeds.

Once the smashing step is performed
 the wet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
 turn into the paste which is stuffed
 into the bags having holes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 pressing them. As This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as the bags filled with pastes are pressed
, the oil is then extracted in the next
 step called Extraction where oil and water are separated
 from each other. At last, the final product is delivered
 to the warehouse or shops in order to store or Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsell.sell!sell?sell:sell,sell;
sell