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The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. E2DD
The given diagram shows the different stages of brick manufacturing for the building industries. The process of making brick involves 7 steps, starting from digging and ending with delivery where it is needed. As is given in the graph, the first step of brick manufacturing is digging the clay with a large digger. Then the clay is filtered in metal grid before the processed in a roller machine and mixed with sand and water. In the next stage, ready-made mixture is cut in wire cutter or kept in the mould to make shapes. After that, the raw bricks are dried in drying over about 24 or 48 hours. The step after this, dried bricks are kept in kiln which is the first is moderate temperature from 200C to 900C and high temperature and then placed in cooling chamber about 48 and 72 hours. After a long time, the ready bricks are packaged and finally, delivered to the companies or building places.
The
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given
diagram
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shows
the
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different
stages of
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brick
manufacturing for the building industries. The process of making
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brick
involves 7 steps, starting from digging and ending with delivery where it
is needed
.

As is
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given
in the graph, the
first
step of
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brick
manufacturing is digging the clay with a large digger. Then the clay
is filtered
in metal grid
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before
the processed in a roller machine and mixed with sand and water. In the
next
stage, ready-made mixture is
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cut
in wire cutter or
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kept
in the
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mould
to
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make
shapes. After that, the raw
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bricks
are dried
in drying over about 24 or 48 hours. The step after this, dried
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bricks
are
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kept
in kiln which is the
first
is moderate temperature from 200C to 900C and high temperature and then placed in cooling chamber about 48 and 72 hours. After a long time, the ready
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bricks
are packaged
and
finally
, delivered to the
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companies
or building places.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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