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the chart bellow shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

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The chart demonstrates information about how often people who live in the United States consume fast food in the restaurants over a ten-year period between 2003 and 2013 Overall, what stand out from the graph is that there were a lot of people who ate fast food several times a week or once or twice a month accounted for the highest percentages, whereas people who consumed fast food every day and never showed the lowest point in the graph. Looking at the details, regarding the consuming fast food among people once a week, it showed 31% and 33% in 2003 and 2006, but at the end of year in 2013 it was consumed 28 % among individuals. If we look at people who ate fast food once or twice a month, it was also accounted upward in the graph. In 2003 it showed sharp 30%, after that it went down to 25% in 2006, at the end of year it peaked at 33 %. With respect to people who consumed fast food several times a week, it started 16% in 2003, but this followed by a sharp increase to 20% in 2006, after that it showed 15. 5% in 2013. As regard people who ate fast food a few times a year, in 2003 13. 5% people ate them and in 2006 they were consumed by 15 % people, following this in 2013 it was eaten by 15% individuals. People who ate quickly prepared food every day or never showed almost the same during the whole period.
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in the restaurants over a ten-year period between 2003 and 2013

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several times a week or once or twice a month accounted for the highest percentages, whereas
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a few times a year, in 2003 13. 5%
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IELTS academic the chart bellow shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

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