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The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Dg8k
The bar chart depicts the output resulted from a survey for examining the Australian’s habit on buying coffee and tea in five different cities. Overall, the people who purchased coffee and tea in a café dominated the overall consuming patterns in all of five cities. However, there was an anomaly in Adelaide that the instant coffee consumer was more slightly than the coffee shop consumer. In more detail, more than 60 percent of consumer in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart preferred to enjoy the coffee or tea in the café over the last four weeks. In Brisbane, the similar type of consumer stood at slightly above 55% while the instant coffee or tea fans was almost the same at approximately 52%. Interestingly, the Adelaide inhabitants shown the anomaly of the consuming pattern. The instant coffee and tea proponents slightly exceeded the amount of the people who liked drinking coffee or tea in the coffee or tea stall. Almost half of the respondents purchased instant coffee or tea in last four weeks, whereas around 48% of the population was still the coffee shop enthusiast.
The bar chart depicts the output resulted from a survey for examining the Australian’s habit on buying
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In more detail, more than 60 percent of consumer in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart preferred to enjoy the
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in the café over the last four weeks. In Brisbane, the similar type of consumer stood at
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fans was almost the same at approximately 52%.

Interestingly
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proponents
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in last four weeks, whereas around 48% of the population was
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shop enthusiast.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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