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The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. 6PG3
The diagram demonstrates for us the bricks process for the building industry. Generally, there are seven stages in the process started at the dig and finish at the delivery. The clay is dug up by digger and then place it onto metal grid for break up the clay into smaller pieces with assistance of roller. Next, There are blended of sand and water turned it into bricks by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter After that, The bricks are placed in an over for drying at least 24 hours up to 48 hours. Then the bricks are move to the heating and cooling process. They are heated in a kiln for moderatre and higher temparture( between 200c to 1300c), followed by cooling for another 2-3 days. At last, the bricks are packaging and delivery.
The diagram demonstrates for us the
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bricks
process for the building industry.

Generally
, there are seven stages in the process
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started
at the dig and finish at the delivery.

The clay
is dug
up by digger and then place it onto metal grid for break up the clay into smaller pieces with assistance of roller.

Next
, There
are blended
of sand and water turned it into
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bricks
by either placing it into a
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mould
or using a wire cutter

After that, The
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bricks
are placed
in an over for drying at least 24 hours up to 48 hours.

Then the
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bricks
are
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move
to the heating and cooling process.

They
are heated
in a kiln for
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moderatre
and higher
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temparture
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(
between 200c to 1300c), followed by cooling for another 2-3 days.

At last, the
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bricks
are packaging and delivery.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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