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the diagram illustrates the process that is used for the production of spaghetti.

the diagram illustrates the process that is used for the production of spaghetti. KWVy6
The given diagram shows the process of spaghetti using production. Overall, the manufacturing of spaghetti include thirteen steps which start with mixer and end by weight checker for spaghetti. In the initial step, it is get row material to be ready mixer for spagetti process after put mixer in mixer machine then go compound machine. Followed next stage, it mixer is rollers and slitter to given shap in spagetti. Next stage, they put in steamer contanair and pass in dipping bath after it texchers take feeder and go next process in flash fryer.
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the process of spaghetti using production.
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, the manufacturing of spaghetti include thirteen steps which
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and
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by weight checker for spaghetti.

In the initial step, it is
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row material to be ready
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for
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spagetti
process after put
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in
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machine then go compound machine. Followed
next
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it
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is rollers and slitter to
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given
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shap
in
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stage, they put in steamer
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and pass in dipping bath after it
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take feeder and go
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process in flash fryer.
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