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The chart below gives information about kinds of books by some different authors read in the UK in January in 2012.

The chart below gives information about kinds of books by some different authors read in the UK in January in 2012. 11kyq
The bar chart demonstrates the number of books read in January with two kinds of books: fiction and non-fiction by different authors namely Amillie, Javier, Nayla, Bill. In general, Amillie read the most fiction books and she read the highest number of the books. Nayla was the one who read the most non-fiction books. As we can see from the graph, there were two people who read the most fiction books, Amillie and Javier. Amillie kept two records in the graph, she read twelve fiction books and she read seventeen books in total. The second rank of fiction books is Javier who read eight fiction books and he had the lowest number of total books. Looking at the graph in more detail, the last couples were Nayla and Bill. Nayla read nine non-fiction books and she were the second lowest of the total number of books. However, the second highest of the total number of books was Bill. He read 12 books and 7 non-fiction books.
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