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The diagram illustrates the process of making olive oil.

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The illustration depicts the procedures by which olive oil is created. Overall, it is evident that there are seven main steps are shown in the process, which starts at picking olive, and ends at packing and selling to the customers. At the first stage of the process, the olives are harvested from trees and then taken to a rising machine where they are rinsed in cold water. Have been cleaned this way, the olives are transferred to a conveyor belt where they are smashed. After that, the olives are separated into olive paste and olive stones. At the following stage, the olive paste is subsequently placed in the bag with holes. After being pressed in the pressing machine, they are put into a separate container where water is separated from the oil. Finally, the olive oil is packaged and delivered to shops, thereby completing the process.
The illustration depicts the procedures by which olive oil
is created
.

Overall
, it is evident that there are seven main steps
are shown
in the process, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
at picking olive, and ends at packing and selling to the customers.

At the
first
stage of the process, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
olives
are harvested
from trees and then taken to a rising machine where they
are rinsed
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
water. Have
been cleaned
this way, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
olives
are transferred
to a conveyor belt where they
are smashed
. After that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
olives
are separated
into olive paste and olive stones.

At the following stage, the olive paste is
subsequently
placed in the bag with holes. After
being pressed
in the pressing machine, they
are put
into a separate container where water
is separated
from the oil.
Finally
, the olive oil
is packaged
and delivered to shops, thereby completing the process.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process of making olive oil.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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