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The diagram illustrates the process by which a ethanol fuel is produces from from and other

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The diagram illustrates the process of recycling waste glass bottles. We can observe from the diagram that there are three main stages in the recycling process, beginning with gathering the wasted glass bottles, the recycling of these bottles, and ending with the delivery of new products. Firstly, wasted glass bottles are gathered at a collecting point. It is then transported to a recycling center/cleaning plant by truck. Next, these are cleaned using high-pressure water to eliminate the dust and other substances before being classified into three kinds of bottles according to their color, such as brown, green and clear. Later, these bottles are sent to a glass factory to be crushed into smaller pieces. The process continues wherein those pieces are burnt in a specific furnace at a high temperature of 600c – 800c to become molten glass. The recycled molten glass and new liquid glass are coupled together and poured into a glass mould to produce new bottles. The new bottles are then filled with drinks, and the entire process of recycling glass concludes after these filled bottles are delivered to the supermarket.
The diagram illustrates the
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process
of
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recycling
waste
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glass
bottles.

We can observe from the diagram that there are three main stages in the
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recycling
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process
, beginning with gathering the wasted glass
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bottles
, the recycling of these
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bottles
, and ending with the delivery of
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new
products.

Firstly
, wasted
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glass
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bottles
are gathered
at a collecting point. It is then transported to a
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recycling
center/cleaning plant by truck.
Next
, these
are cleaned
using high-pressure water to eliminate the dust and other substances 
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before
being classified
 into three kinds of
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bottles
according to their color, such as brown, green and
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clear
.

Later, these
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bottles
are
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sent
to a
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glass
factory to
be crushed
 into smaller pieces. The
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process
continues wherein those pieces
are burnt
in a specific furnace at a high temperature of 600c
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–
800c to become molten glass. The recycled molten
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glass
and
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new
liquid
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glass
are coupled
 together and poured into a
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glass
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mould
to produce
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new
bottles.

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The
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new
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bottles
are then filled with drinks, and the entire
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process
of
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recycling
glass concludes after these filled
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bottles
are delivered
to the supermarket.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process by which a ethanol fuel is produces from from and other

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