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The diagram illustrates the overview of the recycling process of used bottles. It is clear that there are three distinct stages in this process, from bottle collection to the delivery of new ones to customers.

The diagram illustrates the overview of the recycling process of used bottles. It is clear that there are three distinct stages in this process, from bottle collection to the delivery of new ones to customers. KGWn9
The diagram illustrate the information about the three steps of recycling bottle processes and whole the ways complete then it serves customers. Overall, the three steps are elaborating the processes how the bottle recycle new outcome ways and reach the customers. The first step is collection point and the second and third steps are cleaning plant, customer supermarket. Firstly, the bottles are collecting point and then it by the transport next stage. The next stage number two is cleaning plant because this stage bottles are washing high pressure water in three ways such as clear then green and brown. Then the next steps of stage two last processes it goes through the recycling plant. When bottles are going through the furnace it passes two ways one step is recycled liquid glass and another is new liquid glass. Otherwise, the two steps are completed these bottles are go the next steps and the step is mould and this steps is complete the whole package end new bottles. Then the final stage the bottles are reached the customers and the lastly whole ways are completed.
The diagram
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illustrate
the information about the three
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steps
of recycling
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bottle
processes and whole the
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ways
complete then it serves customers.

Overall
, the three
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steps
are elaborating the processes how the
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bottle
recycle new outcome
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ways
and reach the customers. The
first
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step
is collection point and the second and third
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steps
are cleaning plant, customer supermarket.

Firstly
, the
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bottles
are collecting point and then it
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by
the transport
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next
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stage
. The
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next
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stage
number two is cleaning plant
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because
this
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stage
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bottles
are washing high pressure water in three
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ways
such as
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clear
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then
green and brown. Then the
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next
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steps
of
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stage
two last processes it goes through the recycling plant.

When
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bottles
are going through the furnace it passes two
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ways
one
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step
is recycled
liquid glass and another is new liquid glass.
Otherwise
, the two
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steps
are completed
these
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bottles
are
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go
the
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next
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steps
and the
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step
is
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mould
and this
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steps
is complete the whole package
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end
new
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bottles
. Then the final
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stage
the
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bottles
are reached
the customers and the
lastly
whole
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ways
are completed
.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the overview of the recycling process of used bottles. It is clear that there are three distinct stages in this process, from bottle collection to the delivery of new ones to customers.

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183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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