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The given graph and state the information of waste disposal in your country between 2005 and 2008overall it is clear that the method of disposal by dumping in sea increase throughout the year the method of disposal by landfill decreased over 4 years to begin with in 2005 the method of land feelings about 950 terms and its decreased 2006 falls to 1650 terms and in 2008 to 1200 in year 2008 but the burning method of disposal is used approximately 900 terms in 2005 but it increased in 2006 and reaches to about 1200 times and then decreased in 2008 for 850 terms in 2008 probing further the method of dumping in sea had upward trend throughout the yearin 2005 it was used to about 1200 increase in 2006 pages to approximately 1500 times and increased about 1700 this message is mostly used by your country in 2008
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by dumping in sea increase throughout the year the
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disposal
by landfill decreased over 4 years to
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of land feelings about 950 terms and its decreased 2006 falls to 1650 terms and in 2008 to 1200 in year 2008
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the burning
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approximately 900 terms in 2005
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it increased in 2006 and reaches to about 1200 times and then decreased in 2008 for 850 terms in 2008

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further
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method
of dumping in sea had upward trend throughout the
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2005 it was
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to about 1200 increase in 2006 pages to approximately 1500 times and increased about 1700 this message is
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by your country in 2008
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IELTS academic The given graph illustrating information of waste disposal

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  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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