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The diagram illustrates the generating of ethanol fuel from corn.

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The diagram illustrates the generating of ethanol fuel from corn. At first glance, the process involves 9 stages. Beginning with harvesting corn and finishing with delivery to the gas station stage. At the first stage of the process, corn is picked by hand or machine before being placed in the warehouse to ensure safety storage. During the milling stage, corn is being ground into a fine powder, which is then mixed with water and being cooked in 4 hours. In the next, the mixture after being cooked will be fermented in 2 days. At the following period, the ethanol liquid is separated from the mixture after the fermentation, during some solid by-product are taken out. Then, it is seemingly transferred into a clearer liquid version after experiencing a 5 hours of ethanol purification. In the subsequent step, the current ethanol liquid is being stored one more time. The process concludes with the delivery of ethanol liquid to the gas station.
The diagram illustrates the generating of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
fuel from corn.

At
first
glance, the process involves 9 stages. Beginning with harvesting corn and finishing with delivery to the gas station stage.

At the
first
stage of the process, corn
is picked
by hand or machine
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
being placed
in the warehouse to ensure safety storage. During the milling stage, corn is
being ground
into a fine powder, which is then mixed with water and
being cooked
in 4 hours. In the
next
, the mixture after
being cooked
will
be fermented
in 2 days.

At the following period, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
liquid
is separated
from the mixture after the fermentation, during
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
solid by-product
are taken
out. Then, it is
seemingly
transferred into a clearer liquid version after experiencing a 5 hours of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
purification. In the subsequent step, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
liquid is
being stored
one more time. The process concludes with the delivery of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
liquid to the gas station.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the generating of ethanol fuel from corn.

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