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The diagram illustrates the fertiliser production process by organic waste.

The diagram illustrates the fertiliser production process by organic waste. LLyl8

The diagram illustrates the fertiliser production process by organic waste. It can be seen that there are 5 stages in the process to recycle organic waste. It starts with pre-processing and ends with composting. In the first stage, the preparation of a plastic container is about 2m^3 and this container has four holes on its body for air leaving. In the second stage, the container is put in three things: food, grass, newspaper respectively into 15cm tall. After that, nitrogen and hot water are also later added to the mixture. Then, the waste inside would decay. In the next stage, the mouth of the container is sealed. The heat produced during this process could escape through the holes on the body of the container. The next 6 months, the waste mix turns into fertilizer and they could be enriched for all gardens.

The diagram illustrates the Possible spelling mistake. 'fertiliser' is British English.fertilizer
fertiliser
 production process by organic waste.

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seen
 that there are 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 in the process to recycle organic waste. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with Possible spelling mistake found.preprocessing
pre-processing
 and ends with composting.

In the first
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stage
, the preparation of a plastic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
 is about Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "2 m"2 m
2m
^3 and this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
 has four holes on its body for air leaving. In the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
is put
 in three things: food, grass, newspaper respectively
 into Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "15 cm"15 cm
15cm
 tall. After that, nitrogen and hot water are also
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added
 to the mixture. Then, the waste inside would decay.

In the next
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stage
, the mouth of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
is sealed
. The heat produced during this process could escape through the holes on the body of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
. The next
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fertilizer and
 they could be enriched
 for all gardens. 