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The diagram illustrates how to producted energy from a wave and below show the location of machines and discut between the cost of installation and amount of energy can generated.

The diagram illustrates how to producted energy from a wave and below show the location of machines and discut between the cost of installation and amount of energy can generated. pXrOd

It is clear that there are 3 main stage of the electric generation from thewave. Beginning with the the wave swept into the machines. we also see that the hight wave can generated power more than small wave. the first stage is the wave is surged to the machine and the rising of water level can created a wind. Next, the wind is rotated the propeller that are linked with the electricity generator. Eventually, the electric generator is changed the kenetic energy from the propeller to the electrical energy. From the secondary diagram are also show that the machine that are installed far from the coast can generated more than imstalled near the coast however the cost of installed are also higher in the same way

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 wave swept into the machines. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
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the
first
 stage is the wave is surged
 to the machine and the rising of water level can created a wind. Next
, the wind is rotated
 the propeller that are linked
 with the electricity generator. Eventually
, the electric generator is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 the Possible spelling mistake found.genetickinetic
kenetic
 energy from the propeller to the electrical energy. From the secondary diagram are also
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show
 that the machine that are installed
 far from the coast can generated more than Possible spelling mistake found.installed
imstalled
 near the coast however
 the cost of installed are also
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how to producted energy from a wave and below show the location of machines and discut between the cost of installation and amount of energy can generated.

Academic

American English

2 paragraphs

125 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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