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The diagram illustrates how to producted energy from a wave and below show the location of machines and discut between the cost of installation and amount of energy can generated.

The diagram illustrates how to producted energy from a wave and below show the location of machines and discut between the cost of installation and amount of energy can generated. pXrOd
It is clear that there are 3 main stage of the electric generation from thewave. Beginning with the the wave swept into the machines. we also see that the hight wave can generated power more than small wave. the first stage is the wave is surged to the machine and the rising of water level can created a wind. Next, the wind is rotated the propeller that are linked with the electricity generator. Eventually, the electric generator is changed the kenetic energy from the propeller to the electrical energy. From the secondary diagram are also show that the machine that are installed far from the coast can generated more than imstalled near the coast however the cost of installed are also higher in the same way
It is
clear
that there are 3 main stage of the electric generation from
thewave
. Beginning with
the the
wave swept into the machines.
we
also
see
that the
hight
wave can generated power more than
small
wave.

the
first
stage is the wave
is surged
to the machine and the rising of water level can created a wind.
Next
, the wind
is rotated
the propeller that
are linked
with the electricity generator.
Eventually
, the electric generator is
changed
the
kenetic
energy from the propeller to the electrical energy. From the secondary diagram are
also
show
that the machine that
are installed
far from the coast can generated more than
imstalled
near the coast
however
the cost of installed are
also
higher in the same
way
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how to producted energy from a wave and below show the location of machines and discut between the cost of installation and amount of energy can generated.

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  American English
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125 words
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