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The diagram illustrates how to complete a type of tent,which is called a tepee

The diagram illustrates how to complete a type of tent, which is called a tepee MyJ69
The diagram illustrates how to complete a type of tent, which is called a tepee. The progress includes eight important steps, starting with several sticks and ending with a canvas over two meters high for camping. In the first step, some sticks which were picked up by the campers is used to bind three long sticks together by the cordage. After that, the sticks are elevated to be similar a enormous tripod. Thirdly, the tripod is being consolidated its structure by ligatured more sticks. Then, before the rope is wrapped around the crossing joint, all the sticks that have collected before are corded again to ensure its stability afterwards. In the next step, the big canvas, which the campers brought from the beginning, is being put forward and mantled around the high tripod which is made sure that the tent is completely sealed up. After the canvas has finished covering the frame completely, some mental pins is used as a affixing part that the campers use it to fasten the slits of the canvas. Finally, before it’s done, the bottom of the tent is fixed to the ground by using the nails and the ropes. The tent completes immediately.
The diagram illustrates how to complete a type of
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tent
, which
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a tepee. The progress includes eight
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important
steps, starting with several
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sticks
and ending with a
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canvas
over two meters high for camping.

In the
first
step,
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some
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sticks
which
were picked
up by the campers is
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used
to bind three long
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sticks
together by the cordage. After that, the
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sticks
are elevated
to be similar
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a
enormous tripod.
Thirdly
, the tripod is
being consolidated
its structure by ligatured more sticks.

Then,
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before
the rope
is wrapped
around the crossing joint, all the
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sticks
that have collected
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before
are corded
again to ensure its stability afterwards. In the
next
step, the
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big
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canvas
, which the campers brought from the beginning, is
being put
forward and mantled around the high tripod which
is made
sure that the
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tent
is completely sealed up.

After the
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canvas
has finished covering the frame completely,
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some
mental pins is
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used
as
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a
affixing part that the campers
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use
it to fasten the slits of the
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canvas
.
Finally
,
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before
it’s done, the bottom of the
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tent
is
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fixed
to the ground by using the nails and the ropes. The
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completes immediately.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how to complete a type of tent, which is called a tepee

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