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The diagram below shows the changes that took place in Liverton dock from 1980 to now.write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes below.

The diagram below shows the changes that took place in Liverton dock from 1980 to now. write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes below. RVoNp
The alterations took place in a Liverton dock in 1980 and it can be seen that radical changes have taken place in the given four decades/ present is what the layouts illustrate. For a start, the Liverton dock has redeveloped a lot of since then, and it is worth that the coast to the south-east, has been kept intact. However, a education centre, in the west and kid's playing area, in the east has been converted into a couple of the warehouses. There are four ships standing on the river in 1980 and a ship museum on the river in place of the ships. Switching to the rest of the changes, there is a flood barrier on the river towards the coast and Just west of the flood barrier is a bridge. By the removal of the two cranes one on the north between the two warehouses and other in the west with the warehouse and has been constructed a sailing club and a hotel. A apartments have replaced the warehouse and a big parking lot has been made towards the south of apartments. Also, a river walk has been adjoining the river. In short, the Liverton dock has undergo tremendous changes throughout the given period. In present, it has much more facilitating for the visitors to check in.
The alterations took place in a
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Liverton
dock in 1980 and it can be
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that radical
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changes
have taken place in the
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four decades/ present is what the layouts illustrate. For a
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start
, the
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Liverton
dock has redeveloped
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a lot of
since then, and it is worth that the coast to the south-east, has been
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kept
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education
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centre
, in the west and kid's playing area, in the east has
been converted
into a couple of the warehouses. There are four ships standing on the
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river
in 1980 and a ship museum on the
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river
in place of the ships. Switching to the rest of the
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changes
, there is a flood barrier on the
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river
towards the coast and
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Just
west of the flood barrier is a bridge. By the removal of the two cranes one on the north between the two warehouses and other in the west with the warehouse and has
been constructed
a sailing club and a hotel.
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A apartments
have replaced the warehouse and a
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big
parking lot has
been made
towards the south of apartments.
Also
, a
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river
walk has been adjoining the
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river
. In short, the
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Liverton
dock has
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tremendous
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changes
throughout the
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period. In present, it has much more facilitating for the visitors to
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the changes that took place in Liverton dock from 1980 to now. write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes below.

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