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The diagram illustrates how the water is treated.

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The diagram illustrates how the water is treated. Overall, there are ten stages in the process of water treatment commencing with a screening of intake water and culminating with the flow of water from a faucet. At the beginning, water from a reservoir is screened before entering for a treatment. Following that, a pumping machine is used to pump water to a flash mix where water is mixed with polyaluminium chloride and oxidants. Then, water flows towards a flocculations and subsequently to a settling basin. Small pebbles and other particles settle down whereas lucid water heads toward a chamber with chlorine. At the seventh stage, the water flows to a filter membrane through a narrow canal with valves from stage six. Then, water flows to the eighth chamber for disinfection with fluoride, chlorine and lime. Finally, a pumping machine pumps the disinfected water which flows through a faucet.
The diagram illustrates how the
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water
is treated
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Overall
, there are ten stages in the process of
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water
treatment commencing with a screening of intake
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water
and culminating with the
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flow
of
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water
from a faucet. At the beginning,
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water
from a reservoir
is screened
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before
entering for a treatment. Following that, a pumping machine is
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used
to pump
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water
to a flash mix where
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water
is mixed
with
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polyaluminium
chloride and oxidants. Then,
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water
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flows
towards a
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flocculations
and
subsequently
to a settling basin.
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Small
pebbles and other particles settle down whereas lucid
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water
heads toward a chamber with chlorine. At the seventh stage, the
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water
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flows
to a filter membrane through a narrow canal with valves from stage six. Then,
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water
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flows
to the eighth chamber for disinfection with fluoride, chlorine and lime.
Finally
, a pumping machine pumps the disinfected
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water
which
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flows
through a faucet.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how the water is treated.

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